lunes, 22 de abril de 2013

Fourth draft: Formal letter



                                                                              2385 Avenue Salvador Allende
                                                                                                                         Santiago, Chile
                                                                                                                          April 22, 2013
Dear Sir,
            I’m writing to ask for more information about the “African safari” holiday that was advertised in Moneda’s subway. I’m a university as well as my boyfriend, and we are very interested in this trip so we would like more details about it.
            Firstly, I would like to know about the sort of conditions that you have for the holiday. Could you tell me how much is it and if it includes the flight and the hotel/cabin or just the flight? Also I was wondering if there is any extra. Would it be possible if you could tell me if there’s any weight limit because I have problems in choosing the most suitable clothes. About the hotel/cabin in which we are going to stay, I would like to know if meals are included in the prices, and what kind of food it is, because I’m allergic to spicy food so it would be great if you could let the chef know about that, if possible.
            Secondly, I would be grateful if you could tell me what kind of accommodation is available. I would like you to reserve me a place, provided that the safety of the trip can be guaranteed. I would prefer not to share a room with anybody else, unless is there any other single room for us.
            Thirdly, I was very lucky to know Africa when I was 5 years old because my family and I helped a little boy called Abdou who was in poor health, it is hard for me to remember if my parents injected me some sort of medication for going there unfortunately, I don’t have any communication with them, so I wonder whether you could possibly give me details about the diseases and health risks in the Amazon area, and also about accident insurance and how safe it is.
            Finally, would it be possible to give me some information about the equipment that is provided? Do you think I could bring my computer? I’m a very hardworking student so I’m always studying.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
A. R. VALENTINA

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